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Tony Brough's avatar

I like these, thank you šŸ™ I hadn't heard of an abecedarian before šŸ‘

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The pairing of PHANTOMS and GHOSTS is doing something I really love — one moves forward through the alphabet (A→Z), the other retreats backward (Z→A). It mirrors how we experience hauntings: the gradual approach, then the fading away.

And structurally, both poems feel like incantations. The abecedarian form has this ritual quality to it, like you're invoking something letter by letter. The constraint becomes the spell.

Also: "xenogenesis" in PHANTOMS is such a perfect word for that position in the alphabet. Ghosts as alien birth — something emerging from nothing familiar.

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